A seasonal haiku

Undoub’tly, brown grass
dead for the last three months, so
It can’t be eaten

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7 Responses to A seasonal haiku

  1. alfons says:

    No good, this haiku,
    The last sentence should be off,
    I am hungry too.

  2. Arthur says:

    There is nothing wrong
    with the verse I delivered
    thunderbirds are go.

  3. alfons says:

    North, west, east and south:
    Let’s call it pidgin haiku
    Hihihihihi.

  4. Arthur says:

    I am so sorry,
    but you are wrong about this,
    have another cake

  5. alfons says:

    No! Mini pancakes,
    That’s what I prefer these days!
    It’s spring by the way.

  6. Arthur says:

    These mini cakes are
    not what exactly what
    you think they are. Pi.

  7. Arthur says:

    I made an error
    in my latest attempt to
    write a haiku there

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